來呀 互相傷害呀 5個對比論證的練習
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以鵝推送說明
周一：良心乾貨
周二：Win-Win Show
周三、四、五：以鵝小課堂
周六：Uncle E"s Cabin
周日：最新題解析
從上周開始，每周三我不再更新新的知識點，而是複習周一的內容，這些核心的技巧，需要很多的練習來消化和鞏固。
更多的練習對於我自己和對於學生都是很有必要的。通過練習檢驗我自己的方法，也希望你通過練習，鞏固所學。
就像昨天 win-win show 中雅思第一網紅女主播 Tracy 所說的，任何事情想要做好，都是正確的方法加上時間的累積，那麼今天的推送就來延續 Tracy 的真理。
今天要複習的知識點是本周一的【乾貨】：對比論證中，如何找一個合理的比較對象。我給大家設計了 5 個題目的練習，也依次給出了答案，供大家參考。
回顧一下，周一給大家提供的「找對象」方法包括：
1. 根據題目要求對比
2. 現在和過去對比
3. 年長者和年輕人對比
4. 貧富對比
5. 同類事物對比
5個練習：
1. 網購好不好？
2. 出國讀大學好不好？
3. 人們居住得更加獨立好不好？
4. 小孩子應該多玩遊戲嗎？
5. 要不要讀大學？
在給出參考答案之前，先請大家自己嘗試找到對比的對象，然後寫一個比較的句子出來。
下面是我的參考思路和小句子，希望對你有幫助。
▍1. 網購好不好？
涉及到科技類的話題，我們比較常用的對比方法是時間軸的對比。以前要想買到什麼東西，特別是外地或者國外的東西，都非常難。但是有網購海淘，容易太多了。
In the past, it was difficult for people to find goods produced in other countries.However, with the proliferation of online shopping platforms, people can find almost anything online with just a click of mouse. They no longer need to travel a long distance but stay at home with products dispatched to their front door.
同樣，我們也可以對比同類的事物：實體店（可能很遠、價格高、選擇少、要排隊、常常斷貨），現在網購就各種方便了。
Compared withphysical stores, which may be located miles away with few options and crowded shoppers, the online shopping platforms enable users to select from a wide range of products without wasting time on the road travelling from home to the mall.
▍2. 出國讀大學好不好？
這個對比很容易找到，比如跟國內學習比，出國讀書可以接觸到學生來自更多不同的文化背景，從而給學生更大的鍛煉機會。
If students choose to further their education in a domestic university, they are more likely to study with the locals who share similar beliefs and lifestyles.However, when they apply for a degree in a foreign university, they could be involved in a group of international students of diverse cultural and social backgrounds, which greatly improves their cross-cultural communication ability.
或者，我們還可以嘗試對比年齡層，很小的孩子心智不成熟，生存能力差，所以不太適合留學，但是大學生基本已經成年，具備一定的生存能力，可以很好的生存。
Those who oppose overseas learning at college level might worry that the young cannot adapt to the new environment.However, compared withteenagers, those who apply for a higher degree normally have sufficient survival skills and are mentally mature to handle difficulties in a foreign country independently.
▍3. 人們居住得更加獨立好不好？
這是一個現象，那麼比較適合時間軸的對比，以前的時候，人們都住在大家庭（extended family），根據我們後面論證的需要，可以 diss 大家庭的好處或者不足，起到反襯的作用。
比如，大家庭好（人多相互扶持幫助），所以獨居會遇到更多問題，很難解決：
In the past, when relatives lived together, they could help each other when any one of the family has difficulties,butnow when more people choose to live alone or in small family unit, they are forced to deal with many issues alone. Without the immediate financial and emotional support from the family, life could be tougher than expected.
或者，大家庭不好（人多相互牽制），所以獨居會享有更多自由：
In the past, when relatives lived together, they might unavoidably disturb the life of others,butnow when more people decide to live alone or in small family unit, they are able to choose their own lifestyles and enjoy more freedom as to when they should return home and how they could decorate the room.
▍4. 小孩子應該多玩遊戲嗎？
小孩子如果不完遊戲的話，可以做的事情還有很多，比如：搞學習、外出運動、參加社交活動、看電視等等。這些東西根據需求，都可以成為對比的對象。
如果覺得玩遊戲可以很好的放鬆，我們就說對比學習來講，確實更有意思一些：
Compared withacademic activities, in which students are forced to memorize a large quantity of abstract concepts and formulas, playing games on computers is normally less demanding, because the targets in the games are divided and achievable at each level.
如果想說玩遊戲不是最好的休閑方式，我們就說，其他方法比如外出運動等，更有益身心健康：
Althoughplaying games on computers or other digital gadgets can be regarded as an effective method to release the burden of the children, alternatives such as participating in outdoor sporting and social activities seem to be more contributing to the physical and mental health of the young.
▍5. 要不要讀大學？
不讀大學的孩子，也許很早就參加工作了。如果要說大學沒有必要，就說工作裡面累積更多的實踐經驗，而大學更多是理論的知識，非常落後：
Starting career at a younger age, youngsters could accumulate many practical skills and keep abreast of the times, thus having comparatively larger developmental space.By contrast, theoretical and professional knowledge acquired in the university tends to be outdated and cannot keep pace with the fast-changing market in most professions.
如果要說大學很有必要，就說工作裡面缺少專業理論的學習，以後發展的局限性非常大，因為具體的技能會被淘汰，只有核心的理論是長久的：
Starting career at a younger age, youngsters could only accumulate few practical skills and thus have comparatively smaller developmental space because the skills might be obsolete sooner or later.By contrast,the professional and theoretical principles persist and enable the college graduates to maintain a competitive edge in the labour market for a long time.
特別注意：
單純的一個對比的句子，是撐不起來整段話的，對比之後，還是要記得加上原因（為什麼XX更好），或者舉例（XX更好在哪裡），才能讓段落顯得充分完整。
比如之前的段落，出國留學的好處：
If students choose to further their education in a domestic university, they are more likely to study with the locals who share similar beliefs and lifestyles.However, when they apply for a degree in a foreign university, they could be involved in a group of international students of diverse cultural and social backgrounds, which greatly improves their cross-cultural communication ability.
我們擴展成為一段話，還需要繼續寫一些東西，比如，這種跨文化的交際能力對於學生未來發展特別重要，因為整個社會都在更加全球化，更多的企業都在搶佔全球市場，這樣能多文化交流的人，就會有更多的發展機會和空間。
整段寫出來可能是：
…. （在原有的內容後面繼續寫）This is of paramount importance to their future career development because many world-renowned corporations have continued to expand their global market, and candidates with overseas learning experience are obviously more competent in a working environment where talents from the globe have to cooperate.
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學而時習之，不亦樂乎。很多的知識，不論多麼難，其實都是足夠的時間可以解決的。即使成長得比別人慢一點點，只要還在進步，我們離終點就不會太遠。
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